Well this was a fun little game. I liked how despite it being rough around the edges, I can tell a lot of effort and hardwork was put in here! It's not the most polished but it told a nice little story! Looking forward to what more you can make!
Ohh looking forward to what you're making! Hehe, do we have any clues on what it is about~? But either way, goodluck on the project, take care of yourself as well!
I enjoyed the yandere appeal of your game and the surprising twist at the end. I actually felt bad for the characters. You have some great potential in making stories. I loved the catchy tune at the start.
Hey there man! First of all, congratulations on your job! Even with the mistakes, you've done the hardest part that is taking the first step and accepting criticism, I really admire you for taking the compliments and complaints with an open mind.
Just a silly question purely for curiosity, what is your nationality? I'm guessing english is not your native language and was thinking if you may be brazilian, if so, I'd love to talk!
Thank you! And I'm actually American. I was sadly not given a good education so my grammar wasn't so great at the time; but since then I have moved to a better state where I got the proper education that I was severely lacking in.
I truly appreciate the honesty, I know there are some things on the story that I could do better. But I just started coding and it was surprisingly hard working with the story, even with my mistakes, I am happy on how it turned out for my first time making a game.
You did a wonderful job creating this. It's such a cute game, and I love the song in the beginning, it's too adorable. The only negative thing was the grammar but it wasn't much and it didn't distract from the story. Over all I enjoyed it a lot and hope to see more from you.
Hey there, for your first ever visual novel I think you did a pretty good job! The characters and story were pretty interesting and I appreciate the implementation of multiple endings. I really like the music used in the title screen and throughout the game.
There were a few grammar errors here and there, but they didn't deter me from enjoying the game.
Overall it was a pretty good visual novel, and I encourage you to keep on creating!
I also made a short let's play of the game, I hope you don't mind.
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İt was very good game ı am looking forward for the next game
Well this was a fun little game. I liked how despite it being rough around the edges, I can tell a lot of effort and hardwork was put in here! It's not the most polished but it told a nice little story! Looking forward to what more you can make!
Thank You! And I am currently making something new..
Looking forward to hear your reaction to my future projects.
Ohh looking forward to what you're making! Hehe, do we have any clues on what it is about~? But either way, goodluck on the project, take care of yourself as well!
when will there be another update?
I enjoyed the yandere appeal of your game and the surprising twist at the end. I actually felt bad for the characters. You have some great potential in making stories. I loved the catchy tune at the start.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
:-)
Hey there man! First of all, congratulations on your job! Even with the mistakes, you've done the hardest part that is taking the first step and accepting criticism, I really admire you for taking the compliments and complaints with an open mind.
Just a silly question purely for curiosity, what is your nationality? I'm guessing english is not your native language and was thinking if you may be brazilian, if so, I'd love to talk!
Thank you! And I'm actually American. I was sadly not given a good education so my grammar wasn't so great at the time; but since then I have moved to a better state where I got the proper education that I was severely lacking in.
Wait ... why is staying with the yandere a bad ending ?
Is there any good ending while staying with Maria ?
It is a bad ending because you don't want to be with Maria, She is forcing you to be with her against your will.
i think its that the player doesnt like being forced to feel thatway
Why not make more ends or a other?
I have 4 endings not including the game over screens. Plus, I'm working on other projects now.
HEY THERE AND YES I AM SCREAMING FOR NO REASON.........I MAY HAVE BROKEN MY KEYBOARD AND NOW CAPS WON´T TURN OFF
ANYWAY HERE´S THE SECOND PART OF THE GAMEPLAY:
PS: I LOVED ITThank you for playing my game, my future games will be much longer and more captivating. I appreciate the support, and i really enjoyed your reaction.
I truly appreciate the honesty, I know there are some things on the story that I could do better. But I just started coding and it was surprisingly hard working with the story, even with my mistakes, I am happy on how it turned out for my first time making a game.
OWO I am speechless with this game.
It starts in a weird way and makes it seem like we know whats going to happen but then it slaps ya with the horrible truth.....Truly amazing
Loved it and made a 2 part game play
here is the first part:
You did a wonderful job creating this. It's such a cute game, and I love the song in the beginning, it's too adorable. The only negative thing was the grammar but it wasn't much and it didn't distract from the story. Over all I enjoyed it a lot and hope to see more from you.
Thank you for the support, i did my best to fix the grammar.
Hey there, for your first ever visual novel I think you did a pretty good job! The characters and story were pretty interesting and I appreciate the implementation of multiple endings. I really like the music used in the title screen and throughout the game.
There were a few grammar errors here and there, but they didn't deter me from enjoying the game.
Overall it was a pretty good visual novel, and I encourage you to keep on creating!
I also made a short let's play of the game, I hope you don't mind.
Cheers and best wishes.
Thank you, I really appreciate it and I do plan on making more games in the future.
Pretty neat!